The maps compare the center of Islip town, which is small city, before and after plans for its developement.
Overall, the planned develepment for Islip will change the center of city a lot which the most changes will be occur in the North of the Main road.
As the figures show, the main road between two shopes will become pedestrians only and will change to dual carriageway, like as now the bottom way reach to the school, the Houses, and the park respectively. However, the park will be in the same position, it will be smaller than now. Also, the shops that are in the south of main road will remain without any changes.
The shopes which are in the north of the Main road will change dramatically. They will be seperated into Bus station, Shopping center, and car park that they will adjacent to the new housing.
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was 89
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 65
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 78
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The maps compare the center of Islip town, which is small city, before ...
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... the bottom way reach to the school, the Houses, and the park respectively. Howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57432432432 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33501430806 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0519174222 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7142857143 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126627743632 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072981760554 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763499359972 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106787318365 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854184639724 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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