Hello Sir,
i'm Yosuf, i'm an organizer and president of a campaign called "One World", announcing the meeting which will be held on Dec 28 at Mumbai The Taj Hotel.
This meeting is all about the planing to help refugees to go on their live across the border, so representative from different countries are joining to share their views and idea to make this campaign success.
So i request you to please take coverage of meeting and publish this to advertisement.
Votes
Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Mehak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...idea to make this campaign success. So i request you to please take coverage of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 398.0 937.175257732 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 81.0 206.0 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91358024691 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.0 3.78020617076 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87052302793 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 127.690721649 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.753086419753 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 120.6 290.88556701 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7451017542 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12311579744 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845701429295 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456637675495 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084843253624 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452953057271 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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