Essay topics:
Working email
Thanks, Steve
But we will have 2 columns for the organization unit where provides the information (one is ‘Producing user/ Responsible Unit’ if change and another one is ‘Primary user’) if we still keep it.
Besides, I’d like to suggest to change two columns of ‘Primary user’ and ‘Additional user’ to ‘Provider and ‘Consumer’.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 22.412803532 13% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 30.3222958057 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 337.0 1373.03311258 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 54.0 270.72406181 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24074074074 5.08290768461 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.71080601083 4.04702891845 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.39295014471 2.5805825403 170% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 145.348785872 28% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.740740740741 0.540411800872 137% => OK
syllable_count: 109.8 419.366225166 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.55342163355 129% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 13.0662251656 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.0 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.5 110.228320801 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06452816374 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.3589403974 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 10.23 53.8541721854 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.0289183223 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.21 12.2367328918 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 63.6247240618 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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