integrated essay TPO 19
The reading is about the companies hire buzzeres to advertise their products. However, according to reading, because of some reasons is not a gread idea. In contrast, the professore agrees with this policy of the compony for the following reasons.
Firstly, although the reading claims that the consumers should know about the purpose ofbuzzeres, the professor contradicts it by sating that the buzzeres get pay for the saying they think and consumers also get the turth from him.
Secondly, the reading asserts that because the buzzeres pretend as a private individuals,consumers don't conider their endorsements than they should. However, the speaker's opinion is that consumers dont believe everything that hear from the buzzeres and ask about it.
Thirdly, the reading claim is that buzzing is presumably to have on social relationships. However, the speakers disagrees with this argument because the consumers try buzzed products for having a wonderful experince form the past
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- TPO25-integrated essay 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...products. However, according to reading, because of some reasons is not a gread i...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'individual'?
Suggestion: individual
...cause the buzzeres pretend as a private individuals,consumers dont conider their endorsemen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consumers
...uzzeres pretend as a private individuals,consumers dont conider their endorsements than th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tend as a private individuals,consumers dont conider their endorsements than they sh...
^^^^
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'speakers'' or 'speaker's'?
Suggestion: speakers'; speaker's
...rsements than they should. However, the speakers opinion is that consumers dont believe ...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the speakers opinion is that consumers dont believe everything that hear from the b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 152.0 270.72406181 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46710526316 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.04702891845 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93258008749 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 145.348785872 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 419.366225166 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6537511401 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270154409167 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110769306229 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586935977232 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157571913004 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455143145587 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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