A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my deep disappointment with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, Master Chef, which had been broadcasted few days ago. It seems that your journalist, Mr. Sam Conner had only considered the negative side of the program host, Mr Gordon Ramsay.
Even though Ramsay sometimes shows his bad temper on the participants, I personally like him for his excellent culinary skills and being fair towards the contestants. He always gives honest and constructive feedback to aspiring chefs. Moreover, he has shared cooking suggestions with the viewers which I find very useful being chef by profession.
I would like you to issue a stern warning to your reporter not to write such meaningless and one-sided articles, and request your organisation to refrain from publishing such one-sided articles going forward.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
John Smithson.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39072847682 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84580255236 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76821192053 0.622605031667 123% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5980897207 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156444781564 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05585614989 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423590331728 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869766646739 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341892785618 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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