to understand the most important characteristics of the society one must study its major cities
To understand the most important characteristics of society, one must study its major cities
Each and every society has its own feathers depanding upon comprised of what kind of human beings live there; it has is’s own identity on different aspects such as culture,custom, geography e.t.c. major cities are the part of society which is the harbinger of it so, I am consonat with this statement. Because people from different place live there, comprised of varity of culture and most of educated people.
first of all, major cites are the place where every kind of facilities are availabe. Moreover, human beings are also in search of this kind of facilities such education,health, employment and so on. People from different parts of the country wish saty on such place where every kind of facilities are availabe. Every Human being has their own desires so to fulfil this people wants live in major cities. Each and every people has their own identiy which they share with their friends. For eaxample, kathmandu is the major cities of neplai society and most of people stay here due to chich it’s population is more than other cities. Most of people in there educated as well as job holder. So it this is the most important characteristic which people must know in order to understand the anout the society.
Secondly, people are searching for the place where they can live a happy life and major cities are the centre of point for their wishes. So people from different parts having their own cultural identity live here. As nepal is comprised of varity of culture, language cast and so on. For an instance, people in kathmandu speak nepali language which is another characteristic of the major cities. To know about this characteristics one must study of the cites.
Thirdly, learning is another part of the human beings for which they have go the chool,college and unviersity. Most of the education institution are in the major cities. So most of the people in the cities are educated. As this cities is known for the educated people staying place and if someone came and visit this place they will about it. Because the educated people can communicate with the guest from other country knows that people in kathmandu are educated. So this is another characteristic of the cities. This must be known by the people in order to understand about the characteristic of the society.
In recapitultion, as we know major cities are the part of the society due to which society can’t be understood. So every people must study about the major cities in order to know the characteristics of the society. Major cities are the centre place for the people as highly educated people live their, availabilty of employment and it is comprised of various culture with the different background.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...society, one must study its major cities Each and every society has its own feath...
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...ity on different aspects such as culture,custom, geography e.t.c. major cities are the ...
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...culture and most of educated people. first of all, major cites are the place where...
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...f this kind of facilities such education,health, employment and so on. People from diff...
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...y kind of facilities are availabe. Every Human being has their own desires so to ...
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...eing has their own desires so to fulfil this people wants live in major cities. Each...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
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... the major cities of neplai society and most of people stay here due to chich it's popula...
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...s population is more than other cities. Most of people in there educated as well as job holder...
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...n cultural identity live here. As nepal is comprised of varity of culture, language cast and so...
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...of the human beings for which they have go the chool,college and unviersity. Most ...
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... beings for which they have go the chool,college and unviersity. Most of the education i...
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...nd visit this place they will about it. Because the educated people can communicate wit...
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...their, availabilty of employment and it is comprised of various culture with the different back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94926004228 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73939486036 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.353065539112 0.524837075471 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9620364615 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.64 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.92 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318079253137 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108726048063 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115994306233 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288388605489 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247826853883 0.0645574589148 384% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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