Dear Sir,
I am writing here to express my interest for your current opening for the position of Restaurant Manager, advertised in the newspaper - The Morning Time, dated on 22nd Dec, 2017.
Since January 2015, for the last three years, I have been working as Assistant Manager at the ACB Food Supply. Prior to this in 2015 I have completed my bachelor degree in Hospitality Management from National University of Singapore. In 2016 I have successfully completed Bizsafe safety certificate. Currently, I am in-charge of the kitchen section and look after the food quality control and food safety issues.
Since I am not obligated with any bond, I am available to join your restaurant immediately, within a week from the date you confirm my position.
It would be great if we can meet to discuss further and explain my management expertise in detail. If you are available on this coming Monday morning, I will give you a call at 10 am to fix an appointment with you.
Thank you very much for your time and kind attention.
Kind Regards
Somdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing here to express my interest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74489461464 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672222222222 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3629805017 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255046055898 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864403695738 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744122170334 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148823004163 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684254740236 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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