Some people think that you need more money to be happy, while others prefer to have more free time than money. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People who believe that money is more important than time must be very optimistic because they know the value of the money in recent times. However, the other group of people strongly believe that money is not the way to your happy life and therefore more free time is required.
It is widely accepted that money is the inevitable need for humans. This factor cannot be ignored whatsoever. It starts with the birth of infants. For example, to amuse them, parents buy them many kind of toys. When an infant turn into a child, he requires school bag, water bottle and other stuffs of his own choice. Going further, when a child is converted into a college or university student, he needs money to spend on his friends or to hang out with them. This certainly does not stop here. When a person is married he plans to go for an abroad trip to please his spouse and himself. How can a human satisfy his happiness? The answer is money! If people do not have money to spend on them the life would be miserable and eventually over-stressing would be the result which could prove very fatal. It is a clear concept that more money means more joyousness.
On the contrast, other people believe that free time has extraordinary values. They believe that over-indulgence in monetary values decrease the social life. For example, those people who tend to earn more money require to work for extra hours which means they have less time for themselves of for their families. No doubt that with this paycheck they can have the most luxurious life but this cannot be compromised against your private life. Happiness is actually what lies in family. Give your extra attention to them and to yourself. Nothing is more important than your smile, health and family.
All in all I think both money and time play significant role but of course money cannot buy you all the happiness because if it was true then the grudges develop in families or mental stress would not have been existed. Therefore, your time is equally precious as much as money to keep you happy. Money itself cannot give you a sense of satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...xample, to amuse them, parents buy them many kind of toys. When an infant turn into a chi...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...ple who tend to earn more money require to work for extra hours which means they have l...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ant than your smile, health and family. All in all I think both money and time p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, kind of, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67924528302 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38216687396 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539083557951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7323269899 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4782608696 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389461078763 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101995490762 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090110880892 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251270582019 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613478799431 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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