It has generally been observed that in some nations, especially in the developed countries, many people are suffering from obesity, and this leads to declining of their health and fitness condition. The origins of this situation seem to stem from two factors, while several remedies appear to be open to us.
Perhaps the prime cause here is the change occurred in the lifestyle. Due to technology, our lifestyle is moving to a sedentary one. To give a clear example, people intend to have a comfortable life without wasting much time and also energy, thus they use more machines for their manual duties. In comparison to the past, people now are less healthy. Governments could inform people by clearly illustrating these differences in the past and nowadays and provide information regarding to health issues which affect the spine, heart, metabolism and the muscles.
Secondly, it is undeniable that another major cause of obesity is unhealthy diet that consists of fatty foods. Living in a society where time is of utmost importance, people tend to eat foods which are easy and quick. Office workers do not have enough time to consume nutritious foods. One solution to this issue could be done by employers. As a company policy, it might be helpful to allocate much time for employees’ lunch. Governments also should subsidize more to encourage people to join fitness clubs.
By way of conclusion, there has been an increase in the number of obesity people since twenty years ago. The main problems seem to be the change in the lifestyle and unhealthy diet. The key solutions would be the pedagogical method to inform people, together with government subsidization.
- Some employers offer their employees subsidised memebership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.Consider the arguments from both aspects 78
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive development or a negative development? 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 84
- Some people believe that to improve driving standards it is better for drivers to take road safety courses; others think that strict punishment is more effective.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09782608696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73873501862 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9333331444 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167928004692 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047243482238 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280540133727 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094561826872 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00401872730199 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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