You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international calls.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have been satisfied customer for several years. I am writing regarding that I have received October month bill which include
INR 4500 for Internation call charges. In fact this is really unsatisfying for the following reasons.
At no time have I used this phone to make international call which any of the countries. However, my parents, friends and
my relatives are here only, so I have made only STD calls. Eventhough I have checked my call summary and I don't find even single
record that I made International call. As you see there is no possible reason to put international call charges.
I therefore request you to draw these changes and please generate my revise bill accordingly. Also please write has been
actioned and send me a soft copy to my register mail also send me a bill to my address as well.
I look forward to receiving your confirmation that all is in order.
Yours faithfully,
S. John.
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| 2019-02-21 | Prasad | 63 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eceived October month bill which include INR 4500 for Internation call charges. I...
^^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntries. However, my parents, friends and my relatives are here only, so I have ma...
^^^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...gh I have checked my call summary and I dont find even single record that I made In...
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Line 8, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... record that I made International call. As you see there is no possible reason to ...
^^
Line 10, column 95, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...se generate my revise bill accordingly. Also please write has been actioned and sen...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8950617284 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81195029684 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8354076197 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0909090909 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343131488656 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116916908616 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696020228653 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131357628745 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708618696596 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.