The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library manager, in your letter, include
- A brief introduction of yourself
- Your experience and relevant skills
- Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a full-time graduate student in your college and my major is Library sciences. I found some job postings on the job board in career section, and I am writing to express my interest for the position of part-time library assistant during this summer break.
While I was at school, I have volunteered in local community library for seven months. During my tenure there as library assistant, I managed the distribution of books and attended telephonic enquiries. In fact, this part-time work helped me to understand my lessons in Library science.
I would like to let you know that I possess relevant knowledge and experience to take up this opportunity. Moreover, considering my current financial position, I need to work in order to support my living costs. I attached my resume for your consideration.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Paul Noonan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, while, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90779794499 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2700839838 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231534156277 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855335978919 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532072180239 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117716954987 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662023438274 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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