Some people prefer to live in a small town while others prefer to live in a big city. Which do you prefer?
Live in a big city or in the countryside. That’s a good question. Having the pass experience of grow up in a small town and then moved to a big city, now I can choose in which I prefer to live. From my point of view, I prefer live in a big city rather than live in small town in the country side. I have experienced in my live both, good and bad things of living there. Before moved to a big city, I never thought that I would like living in a big city. Now, after 5 years of living in one, I cannot imagine living in a small town again. Even though some people prefer the freshness, the pure air a...
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Sentence: There are a lot of colleges and universities which offering a myriad of opportunities to everyone to study.
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to which and offering
Sentence: In addition, living in a big city bring along a lot of opportunities to work.
Description: The fragment city bring along is rare
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Sentence: There are a lot of companies which offering new positions to work.
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to which and offering
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