Admittedly, people like changes in all aspects such as fashions,consumer goods etc. In this peresent society most of the fashions are followed from the medias,filims etc. The present generation has a tendency to copy the fashion from filims and are implimenting in day to day life.People are more interested in copying fashions. Borrowing doesn't encolse in this small area. People copy from other countirs also.
In addition, these tendency of human beings helps the society in a good marketting.Not in fashion people are commonly try to copy cosumer goods which is food items. Nowadys, most of the people in Kerela depends on fast foods. for example, people now almost prefer chinese foods. As a result the restuarnts are increasing daily. Copying doent depents on age, gender. Whole the world has a way to copy.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Mcgarry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consumer
... changes in all aspects such as fashions,consumer goods etc. In this peresent society mos...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , filims
...he fashions are followed from the medias,filims etc. The present generation has a tende...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...and are implimenting in day to day life.People are more interested in copying fashions...
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Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...terested in copying fashions. Borrowing doesnt encolse in this small area. People copy...
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Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l area. People copy from other countirs also. In addition, these tendency of human...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this tendency' or 'these tendencies'?
Suggestion: this tendency; these tendencies
...rom other countirs also. In addition, these tendency of human beings helps the society in a ...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
... helps the society in a good marketting.Not in fashion people are commonly try to c...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...people in Kerela depends on fast foods. for example, people now almost prefer chine...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...people now almost prefer chinese foods. As a result the restuarnts are increasing ...
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Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...restuarnts are increasing daily. Copying doent depents on age, gender. Whole the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08208955224 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83685173723 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4399492676 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9090909091 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1818181818 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133029332 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410154349375 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048642815028 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103785200179 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000836537731422 0.056905535591 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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