You see an advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory.Write a letter to the organisers of the course . in letter
give some background information about yourself
explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course
enquire about the methods used on the course
enquire about course fees and dates
Dear Sir or Madam
This is Aidin Farughi. I saw your ad the other day and I have become interested in taking part in the course. My field of work is dentistry and right now I am 28 years old.
What is bothering me recently is that I find it hard to remember stuff. Unlike what it used to be, important facts are slipping my mind these days and since I am going to have the AFK exam in months to come, this matter is starting to become worrisome.
I was wondering if you could tell me about your methods. How are you planning to improve the memory in this course? If there is research about them, I would be happy if you send me the results. Moreover, There was no data on your advertisement about the dates and fees. Knowing these in advance will be so helpful if one wants to sign up.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly
Aidin Farughi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26666666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23142264388 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1448927251 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187490693435 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705595225281 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649055495765 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909206638868 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949746159361 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.