Extreme games are advisable or not?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people indulging in dangerous sports like biking, skydiving, water rafting and bungee jumping.
There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns in individual’s life who is taking part in this kind of life-threatening activities. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that by getting involved in these activities people are not only taking risk of their life but also spending lots of money to participate in these activities.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that many of the time when people takes part in the extreme sports then they might get serious injuries and it could take a long time to them to recover out from those injuries. These kind of games are fun but before going to take part in these games one should think about their life and family members also who can get affected by their steps. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on participater’s live.
Hence, it is apparent why many are against of such dangerous activities.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the demerits of these games are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...hem to recover out from those injuries. These kind of games are fun but before going to ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94894494806 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562770562771 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4657552008 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800381456938 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261811035703 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423731298439 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337951083203 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485085507986 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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