The topic at hand implies/suggest that if we have passion interest in ordinary things than only the best idea arises.Many people may believe that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.However in my opinion it is not necessary that the best ideas only arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
To begin, the best idea can be arise when someone has pressure on it or they have needed it.For example, Few years ago we do not have any medicines for disease malaria and a lot of people dies every year because of this diseases.Therefore, scientists have pressure to find the cure of this disease. As a result, we today have the medicine for malaria disease.
In addition, the best idea can be arise when we have time constraint or time limit or save time. For example, few years ago we use CD/DVD to transfer of data . It is useful but have some negative effect and not reliable for long term use. There for it become problem for us to transfer of data.But due to this problem scientists invented pen drive from which we can send data easily and save our precious time.
Also, a best idea can be arise when we do not have any other option. For a example - a friend of mine have very big problem with maths . Every time she give exam she score less marks. So after that she develop some technique in which she can solve that problem in a limited period of time and in a easy way as compare to other students and start getting good marks.
To sum up, the reasons and the examples above substantiate my view that it is not necessary that best ideas only arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things and it depends from person to person ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56535947712 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56498574521 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.6345764994 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18303958208 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670996188979 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608813919645 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118033104954 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647487039498 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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