TPO 25
The passage suggest that acquired clay jars which was found in Iraq and contains a copper cylinder sorrounding an iron rod, can not be used as a battery. However, the professor casts doubt on these explanations by stating that they are not convincing and maybe not correct by the following reasons.
First, the article revers that we need more evidence like electricity conductors which is attached to the batteries. Thus, without having this metal wires, we can not say that they used them as a battery. On the contrary, the professor dispute this hypothesis by telling that local people found this vessels and maybe they did not have sufficient information about other parts of them and thrown away that metals.
In addition, the passage posits that the copper cylinders inside the jars look exactly like copper cylinders discovered in the ruins of Seleucia which people used this cylinders for holding scrolls. The professor refutes this explanation by stating that maybe the origins of this cylinder was from that usage and this can not prove that these cylinders werenot used as a batteries. Moreover, we have some other inventions that their origins are different with the invention and it takes a lot of time to find that or they adapt this apparatus for another usage too.
Finally, the reading article states that there is no evidence of using electricity at that time because there was no implementation for them in their lives. The professor disputes this hypothesis by stating that they used this batteris for producing shock when they touch it. By this usage they could benefited form having invisible power or magical power. Also, doctors used from this electriciy for curing people from pain at that time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
The passage suggest that acquired clay jars which was found...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...esis by telling that local people found this vessels and maybe they did not have suf...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...the ruins of Seleucia which people used this cylinders for holding scrolls. The prof...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a batterie', 'a battery' or simply 'batteries'?
Suggestion: a batterie; a battery; batteries
...ve that these cylinders werenot used as a batteries. Moreover, we have some other invention...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...they touch it. By this usage they could benefited form having invisible power or magical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02787456446 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47914243552 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7184807096 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300592328862 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122017347569 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603417495041 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193755598968 0.162205337803 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019957219618 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.