Nowadays TV has become an important part of our life and it acts as a medium to spread news and awareness and for some people, it acts as a friend. People's opinion differs as to whether or not TV is a companion. I strongly agree with the statement that television helps broadcasting news and act as a companion to few people. This essay will discuss the reasons why TV is helping in the news and as a friend.
There are several reasons why I promulgate the idea that TV is helping in the broadcast the news. Firstly, TV shows the news to people from all over the world even if it occurs in a remote place of the world. We are not aware of some of the places in the world, but television has the ability to bring the news to our home. For example, during the last Olympic games, TV played a significant role in broadcasting the event all over the world.
In addition to broadcasting news, TV act as a companion to few people though they are old. The old generation who often do not have friends consider television as their friend and they watch all the entertainment programs and cultural events on the television. In spite of the above argument, some people consider TV as a bad tool. Thus, TV is playing a vital part in people's life by acting as a friend.
To conclude, TV has increasingly become an essential part of our life and helps to share the new across the world and acts a friend to some people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...ts as a friend. Peoples opinion differs as to whether or not TV is a companion. I strongly agree wit...
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Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...roadcasting news and act as a companion to few people. This essay will discuss the...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...place of the world. We are not aware of some of the places in the world, but television has...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (TV) must be used with a third-person verb: 'acts'.
Suggestion: acts
... In addition to broadcasting news, TV act as a companion to few people though the...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...roadcasting news, TV act as a companion to few people though they are old. The old...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36363636364 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54896943471 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.469154617 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6153846154 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36787344265 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146203247397 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12811907319 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247222057672 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128590268194 0.0609392437508 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 53.1260098522 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.5310837438 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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