The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
At present, who has not ever used internet? Think about it and it is probable that you have it in house, and this is even an valuable thing in order to do your tasks every day. Internet have changed the life of everyone. This invention have allowed that information travel from one place from other faster, improved the communication between people and enhanced the people’s comfort.
First and foremost, most of information you could find by a simple virtual search. What is the first thing that you do if you are in charge of some presentation? Yes, you go to internet. I remember when before ...
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Sentence: Thus, if you want to know about one topic, simply search this word on internet and an enormous quantity of information arrive to your PC.
Description: The fragment information arrive to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace arrive with verb, past participle
Sentence: Although that telephone allow you this same thing, internet is better.
Description: The fragment telephone allow you is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace allow with verb, past tense
Sentence: However, internet has made possible that wide variety of information be transmitted to one point to other point in seconds and it is essential means to share this information with other prople.
Error: prople Suggestion: people
Sentence: You do not have to wait until the people who you want to talk pick up the phone, you simply leave the message in ther inbox and he/she will receive the message as soon as he/she connects.
Error: ther Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Last but not least, internet is not reduced to spreading of commucation or information.
Error: commucation Suggestion: computation
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