Dear Sir,
I am Rutu Shah writing this letter to inform you about the course inquiry which I have already applied to the college
As mentioned earlier, last month I applied for the computer science course to your college.I was eagerly waiting for the response from you about admission confirmation as I want to enroll in this course as soon as possible so I could start my Visa application for Australia, but am surprised to know that I haven't received any confirmation mail from you. So yesterday I visited to the college website and I came to know the course is going to start within 2 months and I am afraid that I may miss my deadline for the course.
Is there any possibility for me to enroll in this course as an international student? I humbly request you to guide me on this and I am also really thankful to you if you can provide further information about the course and the related tution fees to me
I would deeply appreciate if you could give me a prompt reply
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, i am afraid, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47222222222 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59331405306 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.11262275 49.4020404114 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.25 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32112161591 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172700610929 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854636361632 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181173330747 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795508284961 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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