More people than ever before are traveling to other countries now. Why do they do it?
Looking back on the past decades, when traveling to other countries was just for the rich and seemed impossible for many people, we can see that the situation has reversed. In the modern world, traveling is no longer a luxurious hobby thanks to up-to-date technology and transportation; more and more people are going abroad than before. The reasons for this trend will be discussed in the following essay.
First, many people travel intensively owing to the low cost of transportation. Airlines are providing more affordable and economical tickets, which enables people having different range of incomes to purchase them. Furthermore, travelers now can book tickets online, making the process much faster and more convenient. As a result, traveling becomes a leisure activity for many people to wind down after a long time of working and studying. For example, my family and I are really keen on going abroad on holidays because air transportation is simpler nowadays and sometimes we get very cheap tickets due to early booking.
Second, the demand for study abroad has increased rapidly over the last few years, leading to the significant growth in overseas travel. Countries which have reputable educational systems such as the United States and Canada open doors for international students, attracting thousands of them every year. Students benefit a lot from studying overseas: broadening their horizons, making lifelong friends, acquiring new knowledge, earning degrees from top universities and potentially succeeding in the future; therefore, there are students from all over the world traveling internationally these days.
Finally, globalization of the economy makes a large number of people travel to other countries for work or business purposes: meeting, marketing, training and so on. Face-to-face meetings are important to businesses since company leaders need to come together to make business deals and sign large contracts. In addition, worldwide companies attend conferences not only to promote their products but also to network and identify trends and new markets. Some people travel to take advanced courses in their fields or build essential business skills, which help them achieve success in their jobs much more easily.
In conclusion, owing to cheap airline tickets, people are traveling out of their own countries more regularly to get better education and do business. This trend has prompted the development of our society significantly and will continue to rise in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...xample, my family and I are really keen on going abroad on holidays because air transpor...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lly, globalization of the economy makes a large number of people travel to other countries for wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46923076923 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85782430589 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64358974359 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6330088538 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.470588235 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228363022092 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679934196082 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658504840908 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123930060899 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472188234068 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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