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Elderly population has been a steadily increasing trend in many cultures. Is it a positive or negative trend?
The world as a whole and industrialized countries in particular, are moving through a demographic transition to 'greyer' societies. Some people think this greying population can be detrimental to the society whether others view this as an positive trend. In this essay, I am going to discuss both sides of the argument.
Several areas in the community will be be benefited from the surge in numbers of elderly adult. Volunteering is regarded as one measure of social capital and thus an indicator of healthy civil society. Elderly population can play an important role in the field of volunteering ...
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- Elderly population has been a steadily increasing trend in many cultures. Is it a positive or negative trend? 80
- The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 75
- Some people think that government should have different amount of holidays according to their profession. To what extent do you agree or disagree with? 95
- Some people say that advertisement does make us buy things we do not need to. others think that advertisement tells us about product that may improve our life. Which view point do u agree with? 85
- Some people think that it is more important for the government to spend money to promote healthy lifestyle to prevent disease than to spend it on treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent to you agree or disagree? 85
Sentence: Several areas in the community will be be benefited from the surge in numbers of elderly adult.
Description: The fragment be be contains a repeated word
Suggestion: Delete a possible duplicate word:
Sentence: Grand parenting has become an important social role which not only benefits grandparents themselves, but also it appears to benefit grandchildren substantially.
Description: not only ... but also ... is not used properly
Sentence: As people gets older, their likelihood of participating in economic growth tend to decrease.
Description: The fragment people gets older is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace gets with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Description: The fragment growth tend to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace tend with verb, past tense
Sentence: I think our aim including people and government should be to ensure that persons everywhere are able to age with security and dignity and to continue to participate in their societies with full rights.
Description: The word age is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to age
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1789 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.186 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.876 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.921 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.062 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5