Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the evolution of the car industry has been a hot topic among people. Some people believes that in twenty years there will fewer cars in use than there are today. However, I don't agree with this opinion.
First of all, in most developing countries, the usage rate of vehicle is still far more lower than that of the developed countries. For example, most families in China only have one car per family in average, while in United states, almost each grown-up has their own vehicles. As the economy in those developing countries gets better, I believe there will be more cars in use than there are today.
Moreover, the price of vehicle could become much lower than today with the production technique becomes more advanced. By that time, those who now can not afford a car will probably consider to buy a car. On the other hand, with the population grows, the public transportation will become more and more overwhelming so that more people will have to use their own car.
Last but not least, yet there is possibility that vehicle will be replaced by a new type of transportation tool, there is no even any idea of what that will be. As far as I concern, it is more likely that the traditional gasoline vehicles will be replace by the electronic cars or the cars powered by other clear energy. However, no matter what type of energy is used, vehicles will still exist.
All in all, I don't agree that there will be fewer cars in use than there are today in twenty years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...in use than there are today. However, I dont agree with this opinion. First of al...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
... the usage rate of vehicle is still far more lower than that of the developed countries. F...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider buying'.
Suggestion: consider buying
... now can not afford a car will probably consider to buy a car. On the other hand, with the popu...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cles will still exist. All in all, I dont agree that there will be fewer cars in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, still, while, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60902255639 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37931615061 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8377218552 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305356976287 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12945285566 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117094897192 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212921547538 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984004077321 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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