According to the survey people in walled in certain professions are seen to be hornist what is the situation in your country and why
According to research, masses indulged in some business are doing be honest? As per as my views in my country it is depend on situation and person also. Because every people have different ways to grow up their business. I will discuss my views on upcoming paragraphs.
There are many traders are in my country. Some people doing business be very honest. They will stand their Business for doing many efforts.But there are lots of traders they do not doing business to be honestly such as electrical business . There are many electronic equipment available in market but some traders do not provide actual warranty to customer they cheat the customer because sometimes you think was not working and the customer or come in particular shop that there will be purchase the product.but the trader like to customer that product is out of runty and now you will purchase new and the customer is innocent and they will follow the businessmen guideline and purchase new product.
Leaping further after going the customer to businessmen will find out are there we go out and replace the production by company and they increase the profit in addition some doctor will give medicine to patient that will be very costly but the doctor have same medicine is low-cost.they do not do this because they are more profit.
Any conclusion person should have honestly for generate a good business so the business are going good scale and create good the name and fame agitators are doing good business be hornist they definitely grow up their business
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... As per as my views in my country it is depend on situation and person also. Because e...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ry it is depend on situation and person also. Because every people have different wa...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is depend on situation and person also. Because every people have different ways to gro...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...d their Business for doing many efforts.But there are lots of traders they do not d...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... be honestly such as electrical business . There are many electronic equipment ava...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much electronic equipment', 'a good deal of electronic equipment'.
Suggestion: much electronic equipment; a good deal of electronic equipment
...such as electrical business . There are many electronic equipment available in market but some traders do...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...sinessmen will find out are there we go out and replace the production by company a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, so, in addition, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90421455939 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49676674553 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501915708812 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.662357656 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728930823664 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439311880885 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399774292132 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532693463353 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387801784918 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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