You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?
One of the conspicuous trend of today’s contemporary era is drastic changes in climate. Climate patterns have changed over the past few decades and has effected earths wellbeing. Although, there are various fields of study concerning change in climate, greenhouse effect is the most important one. This essay will discuss, greenhouse side effects and causes, and how can we over come these challenges.
Firstly, greenhouse emissions have been proven deadly for our environment. Carbon monoxide is lethal for any living life. Harmful pollutants from vehicles, biomass and fossil fuels give rise to temperature and causing sea level rise and ecological imbalance. For example, In Indonesia, thousands of people were killed due to high volume of carbon dioxide formed in the atmosphere causing acid rain. Therefore, we can say greenhouse gas have adverse effects and need our swift attention.
Secondly, there are ways to combat greenhouse effects challenges. A collaborative approach in overcoming greenhouse effects is need of the hour. For instance, switching to electric cars, planting more trees, banning usage of biomass. Additionally, government can play a vital role by introducing tougher laws and taxation for people not adhering to make better choices for the betterment of the environment. Hence, it can be said making intuitive decisions and making changes to lifestyle can irradiate greenhouse effect issues.
To conclude, this essay discussed current challenge caused by greenhouse gas emissions and how to makes changes to our lifestyle to over come these challenges. In my opinion, studying greenhouse effect can help us make our environment healthy and beautiful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...donesia, thousands of people were killed due to high volume of carbon dioxide for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58754863813 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91101558199 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4979010536 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0501069509976 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019119476724 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185530609369 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0322537122932 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117160600445 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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