It is true that growing of cities associeted with massively people move to cities to enchance their life to be better than before. I intend to illustrate several reasons why this issue could be happened and offer reasonable drastic remedies.
In mostly cities there is improvement intesity that it is always overpopulation with it. Migrate people from countryside or rural areas usually become complex topic as well as this topic. Willing to gain more money and gamble their life to live in urban cities that it is often lead to severe circumstances both people and cities. An uncontrollable people in cities mostly because of lack of job in their origin or rural places and more jobs in their new settle. Moreover, people prefer to move in cities that provide more facilities and the cities support human life more than rural sides, for example, many companies and easily to improve their life.
Furthermore, overpopulation might be solved by a deal of drastic remedies. Generating policy to clear law in the society, For instance, limitation of people from rural side, uplift infrastructures manufacturing, and deal with some business to create regulation that evokes in countryside. Providing more improvement subtances will attract people to back their places rather than choose cities as place to improve their life.
To conclude. I strongly believe which overpopulation may be happened if village or countryside could not offer highly demanding facilities and lack of jobs. In addition, i would ensure the government should pay more attention to this issue in order to create better way to solve overpopulation.
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- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and ma 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cilities and lack of jobs. In addition, i would ensure the government should pay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2337164751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89258582317 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3658395758 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239575679186 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915772499513 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782749831191 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144769850561 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683950184879 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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