Studying abroad
The idea of studying abroad can seem like a fabolous opportunity, but there are also few downback practical, financial and psychological. As an Argentinian person who has not experienced to live in other countries and in months I am going to live in Canada, I can say without any doubt that living away from my home country can be difficult at times. As well as having a lot benefits.
First I will start to name advantages to study abroad. On the one hand, there are new friends to make, new experiences to have. Furthermore, if you have this opportunity playing some sport, you will gain more hight level because in the university a competition is exelent. Not only is it great fun and an aventure, but also it is a perfect mix of study and sport.
On the other hand, there is only one disadvantage when you live far away from your home. Personal speaking, I really close to my parents so it could be a hard experience.
To sum up, from my point of view I consider that this experience to studying aborad, probably it will be the most amazing of my life. I am very grateful of this opportunity for the simple reason that only few people can get it.
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| 2019-01-18 | badr | 68 | view |
| 2018-02-04 | tamarapinto | 70 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing aborad, probably it will be the most amazing of my life. I am very grateful o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, well, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 1373.03311258 69% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47169811321 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68422338485 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5936658054 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187888955084 0.272083759551 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833168781488 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133644326943 0.0662205650399 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101840098669 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076720675372 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.2367328918 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 63.6247240618 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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