Dear Mr John,
I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to continue my evening trading course starting today. Please allow me to elaborate my situation.
As you know, I work with FIS global as a full-time systems Analyst, and my firm has recently shifted its location from west to East of the Pune city. Considering the traffic situation in Pune, as you might have guessed, it takes me a lot of time travelling to and from office. Consequently, I am finding it difficult to attend the evening classes. Your classes have been of very much help to me in the recent months and I really would like to continue, however I am finding it difficult to do so. Nevertheless, I was wondering if you have any batch over the weekends and if you can squeeze me in, that would be a life saver. Also, please let me know if you have any online courses or webinars that I can attend to, as this will help me study during my travel time.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Gratefully
Amar Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35294117647 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46540883577 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3863617148 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28496653062 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107171439557 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052658990292 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175045286279 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521366280289 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.