eNowadays people care about their appearance more than before. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
In this complex and contemporary society fashion is in vogue. Generally people are more fashion concious these days. Nowadays, economy has become stronger and wider in comparison with past time, whichh provide more freedom to people to do what they want. Here i m personally inclined to the favour of this statement people are more appearance concious.
To begin with, gone are the days, when people used to do small work at home and jobs were more labour intensive.In this new miillennium , various sorts of profession are being emerged rapidly such as in hospitality, hotels, tour and travelling,,in front of office and many more. It is essential to have a good look and it is a part of these professions. Moreover, influence of westernization and globalization force people to change there appearance cultural barriers are almost diminished whereas culture exchange has graining ground. Due to this culture exchange people are more inspired by fashion.
Further emphasizing my point of view, mass media is also significant contribution to this lifestyle. As television, magazine and internet present a huge number of ceebrities and glorifying people like models and film stars. Media target female, girls and children are more vulnerable. Sometime with vouchers and discount available in shopping, beauty centre and many more. People are more tempt to enhance their beauty. Media give birth to this dictum,'"Better be out of world than out of fashion". Media also make believe people being modren and good looking is an essential as food and shelter.
on the other hand, some opponents ponder that other aspects of life needed to be care such as family, education, health and so on. There are various profession which require education, appitute rather than appearance. Furthermore, fashion influnce cultural as well as traditional value, if people follow western culture they forget the value of their own culture.
In conclusion, after doing the great deal of thought and delebretions I would like to say that fashion is inescable and inevitable in this modern society to survive and people need it. Eventually I would say," While in Rome do as Romans do".
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