Today, people believe that extra classes are much more important for their children even though they have enough education at school and hence they enroll their children for extra classes after school hours and during weekends. In my opinion, I agree that education is important for children but getting too much involved will lead to some other problems, both physically and mentally. So, definitely, organizing extra classes will not lead a healthy life. However, this essay will shed some light on the reasons that have shaped my opinion.
Firstly, children are well trained by their subject teachers to score good marks and given tests every month to excel well. But, some parents want their children to be a scholar and hence they organize extra classes after school hours and during weekends. Weekends are the days where children get time to relax but currently, this trend has been changing. However incorporating more classes will probably result in mental sickness.
Another point to consider is that, children get exhausted if they spend more time in academics. Research have shown that a student must get involved in studies only for six hours per day and rest of the day should be spent in doing other activities such as drawing, playing with their friends, etc., and sleeping. If not done so, they are more likely to get isolated and diverted.
In conclusion, extra classes are not that helpful for children if they are given adequate education in their school. So, organizing extra curricular activities than extra classes will be more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11284046693 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37846653536 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6245023352 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.076923077 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299609807863 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103205345987 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10018010557 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185999314069 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725219548682 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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