Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks.
Always, humans are curious to know and examine new matters around their lives, and experiencing all novel things is very exciting despite the fact that maybe people encounter some dangerous circumstances. However, some people want to do everything which is good without any change. With this regard, I was of the same opinion about that people obviously prefer to experience new things, though, causing some risks for people, and I will explain my reasons hereunder.
First and foremost, nowadays, money appears to fulfill materialistic requirements, due to some people prefer to get money as much as their ordinary need; however, others want more money as affluent people. Typically, for making money considerably invested in the new and novel economic activities as start-up businesses. Economically, novel activities allow that people can be prosperous as soon as they conceive it will happen, also. For example, in the contemporary internet, many new apps and software are designed by advanced people for making money quickly, even though, some these apps failed in this approach. For reaching successful must be trying new things, whether many obstacles are in this path.
Secondly, skills and abilities are an important role in every career, so that employees for enhancing their career opportunity should have the best skills. Normally, learning new things and grasping up-to-date knowledge must devote specific time for taking it. The major drawback of this situation makes them deprived of a daily job, presumably, they think that to be disappointed and even failed; However, with great effort, they can get a lot of abilities as expert people for flourishing. For example, as standpoint statistic of Asian countries shows, if people who have a normal job make attempts to get a new ability, they have a lot of chances to get the best position of their job and take more income for having more welfare.
All in all, my belief broadly agreed with that people should try to new matters, in order that not only get wealth instantly but also reach to sophisticated abilities for getting high-class careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Always, humans are curious to know and examine...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s soon as they conceive it will happen, also. For example, in the contemporary inter...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke more income for having more welfare. All in all, my belief broadly agreed wit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilities for getting high-class careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2082111437 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71919467109 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 145.348785872 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592375366569 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.469119551 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.615384615 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25662986325 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932883503476 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453105695841 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156786946452 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053204244068 0.0443174109184 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 63.6247240618 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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