Some people believe that children s success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents Do you agree or disagree Give your own opinion and examples

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...petitive era of modernisation. Presently ,some masses assert that parents play a g...
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...f achievement in their future life. Here,I would like to accord with the demonstra...
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...e success in their lives. To elaborate, most of juveniles are sent to sovereign school by their g...
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...t excellent academic skills. As a result,it is a capital idea to connect with sever...
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...s,scientists and engineers. What is more,off suffering can attain a great deal of kn...
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...mily and nation from their parents. Further emphasizing on my point of view,parents...
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...l development of their juveniles so that,they may become a innocent member of the soc...
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...their juveniles so that,they may become a innocent member of the society and soci...
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...aven. To justify, parents provide social,moral and cultural values which make them suc...
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...cessed in their future career. Therefore,they become social animal. Apart from that,s...
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...ey become social animal. Apart from that,several national and international scientists a...
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...r guardian who supported to her socially,emotionally and financially. Consequently,it is uni...
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...motionally and financially. Consequently,it is universally acknowledged that,parent...
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...ntly,it is universally acknowledged that,parents set the pillor of successful career of ...
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...eir adolescents in this competitive era.On the contrary others have conflicting vi...
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... conflicting view. On the other hand,initially,some masses did not get support from th...
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...rnery talent. One more real life example,my friend roashan Nain is a perfect exampl...
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...friend roashan Nain is a perfect example,he got the job of a teacher in government ...
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...by their own efforts. Last but not least,some parents can not provide support due to,...
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...e parents can not provide support due to,illiterate and poorness. To recapitalisation,i...
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...te and poorness. To recapitalisation,it is well said that,children are the futu...
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...To recapitalisation,it is well said that,children are the future of a nation. Thus,juveni...
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...hildren are the future of a nation. Thus,juveniles must do their efforts in order to get a...
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... big achievement in their lives. However,we can not underestimate the importance of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, such as, as a result, on the contrary, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52284263959 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50068000447 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581218274112 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9429216637 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184844329973 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529311459605 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040326808447 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107208748324 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185326574476 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.