04/11/2017Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:– describe the problem with the dog– explain why it is important for you to sleep– outline what your neighbours could d

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

I am writing to bring to your attention an issue that has been deeply irritated me for the last several weeks. Last night, your dog awoke me for the fifth time in this week and I wish you could take some actions to address this problem.

As you may already be aware of, your dog, Betty, has been started wandering around the neighbourhood late at nights, urinating all over my fences, and destroying my garden severely with all the holes that she dug. Yet, the worst thing is that she usually barks loudly in front of my house, which often wakes me up in the middle of the night and keeps me awake for several hours after. This problem has affected me a lot as I find it difficult to stay concentrated at my workplace in the morning without a good sleep the night before. For this reason, I would be grateful if you could have your dog locked inside your house after evening hours so that she would not cause any further problems.

I look forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Jon Snow.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45502645503 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17285811623 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0982327599 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265881277458 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979656642972 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739791008812 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134969471208 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860982595218 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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