Write a letter to the manager of the transport corporation of your city, complaining about the insufficient number of local buses plying in your area in the morning time. Write the problems encountered by the residents of your locality.
Hello Sir,
I am Priyankaa, residing in Perungulathur area in Chennai. I am writing this letter to seek support for increasing public transport in my area. Our area is the hub of IT companies and international schools and we have lot of people rely on public transport to commute.Currently, we do not have sufficient transport facilities to accommodate people needs. We have bus and train facilities, which is not able to serve the need of people. Most of the school students are travelling in crowded bus, which is not safe for them. Office people are not able to go to office on time, because of the poor transport facilities in the morning time.
I would suggest you to increase the number of bus in morning time 8 AM to 10 AM. This is peak time for office people and school students.If we have some extra bus during this peak time we can manage the crowd. We are not facing this problem in other time except 8 AM to 10 AM. Hence, I would like you to provide your support in arranging extra transport facility for our area.
Thanks,
Priyankaa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Currently
...ple rely on public transport to commute.Currently, we do not have sufficient transport fa...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bused', 'bussed'.
Suggestion: bused; bussed
...es to accommodate people needs. We have bus and train facilities, which is not able...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...e for office people and school students.If we have some extra bus during this peak...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e for office people and school students.If we have some extra bus during this peak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75564373757 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3247237003 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166314122846 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633228189224 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498623351195 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132421580406 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00465636321313 0.0580467560999 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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