In today’s societies, the question of which of the automobiles, bicycles, or airplanes transportation has an important effect on people’s lives has become a controversial issue among people in many circles and camps. Different people have various types of responses to this topic based on their cultural, social, or even familial backgrounds. However, as far as I am concerned, I think that airplane transportation causes more changes in human’s life for some reasons that I elaborate them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first thing immediately comes to mind is that airplanes transportation reduce the time of the travel noticeably. In other words, people can expeditiously travel to many places throughout the world just in few hours. Accordingly, not only they can see more places in the world but also they can accustom to diverse types of traditions. Therefore, They feel much happiness as well as satisfaction in their life. Let us make a brief explanation about that. According to the research that was conducted in Tehran University, Scientists found out that as long as the people use aerial transportation system, their tendency toward distant traveling increases significantly. In addition, they have more interested to read about different customs in the world.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be mentioned is that airplanes changed the business plans of many enterprises. In fact, this vehicle helps business to broaden their activities because their manager can easily attend in each place throughout the world. So, people can access the various brands from any country. Hence, they can choose and use better and more suitable products as well as services. Let me shed a light on my point. According to the information that was published in the authentic website, the quality of services and products ameliorate remarkably in most of the countries as far as a plenty of company can attend in many countries around the world because of airplanes.
In conclusion, there are numerous of reasons to show that airplane brings about a lot of advantages in human’s life. This transportation system helps people to travel easily and conveniently throughout the world and also provides better services and commodities for people. Thus, it is legitimate that any person the airplane as an important invention in people’s lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'airplanes'' or 'airplane's'?
Suggestion: airplanes'; airplane's
...thing immediately comes to mind is that airplanes transportation reduce the time of the t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36436170213 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09029163477 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547872340426 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9715176097 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.157894737 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216254072205 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592269562649 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654530163952 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144006236615 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966197696583 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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