When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...n of the road to success. So if someone said me 'when people succeed, it is bec...
^^^^
Line 1, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...rk. Lucky has nothing to do with success,' I will respond negatively. In my opini...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...gs special chances that will change the persons life. When I say this, many people can ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...used about the significance of my word. Than lets think about it very simply. Think ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...used about the significance of my word. Than lets think about it very simply. Think ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...irst discovered the concept of gravity. Lets take a look at Newtons stories. Did New...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1085, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ry true that hard work is important. But , I think no matter how hard a person mak...
^^
Line 3, column 1366, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...rning point always available to anyone? Than what are the many people who tried thei...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, as to, for example, i think, of course, in my opinion
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.0286738351 254% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34724857685 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45909998201 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445920303605 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7778335824 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3823529412 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305302905595 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782552756124 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713287824166 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239143910103 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092580798977 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...n of the road to success. So if someone said me 'when people succeed, it is bec...
^^^^
Line 1, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...rk. Lucky has nothing to do with success,' I will respond negatively. In my opini...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...gs special chances that will change the persons life. When I say this, many people can ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...used about the significance of my word. Than lets think about it very simply. Think ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...used about the significance of my word. Than lets think about it very simply. Think ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...irst discovered the concept of gravity. Lets take a look at Newtons stories. Did New...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1085, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ry true that hard work is important. But , I think no matter how hard a person mak...
^^
Line 3, column 1366, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...rning point always available to anyone? Than what are the many people who tried thei...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, as to, for example, i think, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.0286738351 254% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34724857685 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45909998201 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445920303605 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7778335824 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3823529412 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305302905595 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782552756124 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713287824166 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239143910103 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092580798977 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.