You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success Write a letter to thank the hotel manager In your letter give the details of the party the reason why the party was

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You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel

Submitted by xyz123 on Thu, 03/01/2018 - 16:42

Dear sir,

I hope my letter finds you in an ideal vibrancy. I would like to express my gratitude for the impeccable arrangements that you arranged at your hotel regarding my grandmother’s ninetieth birthday party.

The event was attended not only by her family but also by her old and new friends. In the first place all the guests praised the administration of the ceremony. The event was a Hi-tea from 4 PM to 7 PM which was only possible with your trained staff particularly the waiters next to the buffet. The old lady was jubilant when she saw the round table sitting plan especially the...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I hope my letter finds you in an ideal v...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other's ninetieth birthday party. The event was attended not only by her f...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of the guests with his artful music. Please accept my gratitude, and extend m...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and extend my regards to your staff. Yours faithfully,
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, regarding, so, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04787234043 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00306825894 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1949366061 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125634312406 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404698590326 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293779512926 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544121169593 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414885795196 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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