Life nowadays is generally much more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it!
People are currently confronting to the undesired under-pressured life. The better life in the past seems to be a fairy tale to grandchildren. There are three causes and solutions for people who are experiencing more stressful than in the past in Jakarta.
Firstly, people face working competition in their workplace. The future challenge encourages either company or institution having skilful and competent employers. For those who are ineligible certainly might be resigned by the company. Secondly, if people are unable to earn much money, their daily need might not be covered. As an effect, they might be starving. Thirdly, family’s problems add the people gradually to be under-pressured. If there is no resolution, family’s complication is possibly bigger because of the obstacles which they are confronting at home a lot.
Overcoming all the stressful happen, working professionally in workplace becomes one of the answers. People should obey the company’s rules, work on time and enjoy the workplace. Then, what people do to cope with the stress is to survive economically. The increase of economic atmosphere leading to expensive of goods, slightly realizes the people not to be shopaholic. As a result, people considerably buy the needs if merely necessary. The last is to spend more time with family. It is presumably better to do than going anywhere after working. The family’s chemistry might bind tightly. The quantity to chat and laugh with family’s members might improve. The problems at workplace surely might be told to the family in order to get the suggestions from them.
From the above, we have seen the stressful causes which people own and the resolutions to diminish under-pressured life. If people might not solve complications they obtain, they would be more stressful and feel that life is difficult to face. Then, people should be a professional worker, more frugal in daily life and love family more.
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