Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals think that tourists should accept the tradition of local citizens when traveling to different countries, while others might argue that local habitants should embrace cultures from overseas. This essay will discuss both points of view and provide my personal thought.
On the one hand, advocates are likely to content that visitors can have extraordinary journeys if they are willing to enjoy and experience how the locals live. For example, western individuals usually use forks or spoons rather than chopsticks as tools for eating. When they go Asia where chopsticks are the typical equipment for eating, some might choose to avoid having dinner in Asian restaurants because of the unfamiliar dinnerware. However, it is a pity to doing so since they may lose the opportunities to have an exotic dinner which may be rare in their home country.
On the other hand, others may argue that once host countries adopt the differences from other cultures, the local tourism industries will benefit from the change. One major reason is that it will attract more travelers if there are less cultural barriers and if everything is similar to what they understand. For instance, if natives in a non-English speaking country learn how to speak English, it will let English speaking visitors feel more comfortable and convenient when traveling, boosting the numbers of the tourists to spend more time there. Additionally, foreigners can save their time in looking for eating place if there are enormous restaurants from their countries on the street.
In conclusion, I think both sides of the arguments have their merits. On balance, in my opinion, I believe that tourists should try to embrace the different ways of living when traveling to other nations since experiencing the other culture is one of the main purposes of the journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19397993311 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68995721989 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3286421655 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234571544685 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790885456874 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779076019881 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15612513605 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831250570679 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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