Computers are electronic devices which were developed to ease human activities. But, children are using these machines just to play games. With the emergence of internet, plethora of games are available online. Parents believe that studies and mental as well as physical health of students get effected badly as they are spending lots of time in playing online games. I also agree with this statement and I am going to explain the reasons supporting my opinion in following paragraphs.
Youngsters are wasting their most of the time by playing online games. After coming back from school, they directly go to their computer room and start playing games. They are not paying attention towards their academics and are not able to score good marks in their examinations. Children get too much addicted towards computer games that they do not go outside to play sports with their friends so they are suffering from various health issues like obesity as they do not perform any physical activity but keep on sitting for long hours to play online games. Beside that, toddlers are not getting socialize but are becoming self-centered. As they are not investing time with their family members and friends and are not able to
share their feelings or problems to anyone, so suffering from stress and depression. Moreover, Spending lots of time on staring at the screen of laptop or computer, children's eyesight get effected.
Leeping further, students get too much involved in playing computer games that they do not eat food at proper time, they become weak and their body does not work properly. Their immune system get effected and they may fall ill easily or frequently. There is a saying that Every coin has two sides. Similarly, playing online games have disadvantages as well as advantages. Some of the profits of playing computer games are that these are good source of entertainment. When learners
feel bored, they can play online games to refresh their mind. Moreover, There are brain storming games as well like solving puzzles, etcetera. Children can play such games to improve their thinking capability.
In conclusion, I would like to say that, as discussed online games have merits as well as demerits. But excess of everything is bad. If children can play such games for sometime just to soothe their mind, it would be beneficial for them. But if learners are wasting their whole time in playing games on computers then they have to suffer from great loss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00970873786 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4808247559 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7515735936 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225249638379 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740544896687 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477365334405 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137846616472 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498355273143 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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