The map below is of the town of Gartsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town, The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map provides information about planned to Build new supermarket (S)in the town of Garlsdon and two possible locations is suggested in given map.
Taking information into consideration,It is quite conspicuous that S1 is located in the north-west of Garlsdon at the country side.whereas,S2 planned to build in the almost central town in no traffic zone and near to south industry.Train and Road transportion facilities is available for both possible sites.
The first supermarket is near to Hindon town. While,quiet far from Bransdon and Cransdon town but nigh to Garlsdon people living area & both transport is available for 65 thousand people of Garlsdon. The second potential spot for supermarket is the town centre. It is well nigh to railway and highways is connected easily all nearby town
To town centre and make easy to visit for 50,000 public living in 3 town around Garlsdon but using public transport is quiet good as compare to personal vehicles because of no parking zone.
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- The map below is of the town of Gartsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town, The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
... Taking information into consideration,It is quite conspicuous that S1 is located...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Train
...traffic zone and near to south industry.Train and Road transportion facilities is ava...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , quiet
...upermarket is near to Hindon town. While,quiet far from Bransdon and Cransdon town but...
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Line 9, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ways is connected easily all nearby town To town centre and make easy to visit fo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99084107159 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.0887337554 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321070532978 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184987490619 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919768094852 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20184621735 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954289101839 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.