Would you rather your school spend money on social events and facilities or on improving cafeteria menus? Use specific examples to support your answer.
It is a controversial topic that whether the school should spend more money on social event or cafeteria menus. Some hold the opinion that schools should spend more on social activities and recreational facilities, because it is a effective way to get more students involved in extra-curricular events, which can expand their knowledge and minds. However, in my opinion, it is our cafeteria menus that ought to be taken as higher priority.
First of all, placing more funds on school cafeteria serves as a efficient method in attracting more students to eat at school. The food in my school is actu...
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