In some rich countries, the number of children at secondary or high school who are taking science subjects in declining. What effect might this have on the children’s and their countries’ futures? How can children be encouraged to study science?
Science is an important subject which gives long-term benefits for many countries in general. In some developed countries, for example United Kingdom, the vast numbers of students at secondary level who are choosing science subject is decreasing gradually. This phenomenon will contribute major effect both for children and their countries’ futures. Some policies must implement for preventing serious problem in future. This essay will discuss the main issue.
Firstly, adolescent is the most important period in human life. In this phase, brain capacities explore perfectly. If students do not ...
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