The world becomes modernized day by day. People are becoming rich by there hardworking and knowledge. In the current circumstances, people think the money is only things that they able to become the successful person. In this statement, I argue that the person is achieving success is not only to earn lots of money. People can achieve the successful tag from the good education and the good human morality.
On the one hand, the money is the very necessary thing to become happy because we can do anything with money. We can live our life with very luxuries way to buy the very expensive things like well-decorated building, expensive vehicles, buying lots of property. People can fulfill their own demand to spend lots of money. The parents can able to enroll their child in the very high reputed school and be providing the very good facilities to them in their own childhood time. Additionally, they can spend money on buying the most expensive clothes, latest technological gadgets, and accessories. In the world today, the people looking eyes is becoming different who has lots of money.
on the other hand, the person is also successful who has the good education and good morality and ethics. There are multiple numbers of problems in the current society such as terrorism, rape and other different kinds of crimes so, such kind of crime is reduced from the well-education and good human behavior.The person who is working in the field of social service without any condition such kind of person can get the blessings. People should try to share the good thing which will fruitful to the society. Such people also be a ranking of successful people because people can remember them in every moment. The good morality can help to preserve the humanity in the society. Those people are always immortal in the human heart.
In conclusion, the money is also the valuable thing to become a successful person. People remember such kind of people until he has money after that they might forget them but the people who have the good education and good human behavior is always a light of the society and they are ranking in the successful person in the society. People remember and follow and tell the story of that person in the century of time. so, to become a successful person human need to be a good education and the human behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...ney on buying the most expensive clothes, latest technological gadgets, and accessories....
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ng different who has lots of money. on the other hand, the person is also succ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... well-education and good human behavior.The person who is working in the field of s...
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Line 7, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... of that person in the century of time. so, to become a successful person human ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81683168317 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53140261827 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420792079208 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0046919639 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194753583017 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753792904453 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745535231171 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136084634875 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359542844543 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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