The two pie charts illustrate 6 types of energy consumption and contribution of greenhouse gas emission in Australian family in percentage.
Overall, the largest energy usage are heating and water heating, account for 72 percent, while the majority of greenhouse gas emission come from other household energy usage, which are refrigeration, other appliances, lighting and cooling.
The most significant energy use is consumed by heating, accounted for 42 percent, followed by water heating amounted to 30 percent, which are three quarters of total energy usage. The other energy usage are not so obvious.
Although the energy usage rate are not standout, those insignificant energy consumption are responsible for the vast greenhouse gas emission, with a number of 53 percent in total, which are almost double in proportion.
To sum up, even though heating including water heating spend more energy, other less frequently use household energy produce the most greenhouse gas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which are almost double in proportion. To sum up, even though heating including...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86523995505 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8305047241 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256920834844 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140476644435 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411117874263 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156282715851 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031046456108 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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