To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Human society development takes at least several years; sometime it required hundred years or more. People build their homeland and breed the offspring. Gradually, the society builds and it conflate culture and several local knowledge. No matter in the hub city or under development country’s village, whether in New York or Miaoli (a remote town in Taiwan), society are formed by our input and transforming by time.
City carries many society characteristics. By the density living residence, we can know the way they communicating to each other. We can test what is the best cuisine in their culture and we can observe the ambience of society. For instance, in the East Asia, Tokyo and Taipei are distinctively. Tokyo’s resident have faster pace and people usually very polite. When you live or work at there, usually you can feel an anxiety because of heavy workload or tiny living area. And as everyone knows, Japanese people love sushi. On another hand, Taipei is subtropical capital. People are talking to each other louder than Japanese and most of foreigner describe Taipei is an easygoing city. Due to its higher average temperature, cold drink vendors are everywhere.
However, city cannot stand for all the figures of society. Many orthodox society habits only can be found in rural village. The place resident are farming and grazing for survival. They follow their ancestor’s way to live, to eat and to breed. Take cuisine for example, the tradition way of cook, like using earth oven, only remaining in the rural village. Although such a maneuver takes several hours to prepare a meal, the taste is distinctive from the fast food. Same as culinary, the understanding and the value are wide parted from their city relative, and either the concept of society. Overlook the countryside society will not have overall understanding of a society.
In addition, urban environment usually removes their tradition society characters in order to adjust for commercialization and globalization. This means the urban dweller have to fit in their busy and hustle life style. People have to finish their meal fast because usually they have only one-hour lunch break. Many city dwellers are forced living restrict space because of exorbitant house price. High-speed online chat replaces old-fashion visiting or mailing. The society in urban area adapts the modern challenge. Lots of culture characteristics no longer able to be found in the city area.
For conclusion, neither city nor village can give to complete picture of society. Although city show you a lot of angles about a society, rural country sometime preserve more information about their culture. The best way to understand a society need to observe from many subject, from the food, behavior, language and etc. No single aspect can provide whole idea about a society.
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...ave overall understanding of a society. In addition, urban environment usually r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21041214751 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76748954919 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566160520607 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 779.4 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6261560191 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7878787879 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9696969697 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.83258426966 393% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999260296067 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231808161971 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273143877864 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560048357872 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321889407059 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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