you can not go to a company where you got an offer. write a letter to the hr supervisor to
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express your gratitude
explain that you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding your offer to me to join your staff.
At the moment, I go to the clinic and work four hours per day from 3 p.m to 7 p.m. I use the morning time to study and go to the French class inasmuch as I have decided to immigrate to Canada. I have come to realize that you needed an employee working at your clinic every morning for at least the next six months. Thus, although I was looking forward to work for you, I have no there choice but to turn down your offer.
Nevertheless, I appreciate your offer very much since not only is it flattering to get a request from your institute, but it would have been such an honor to work with the great staff you have got.
To be frank, I am satisfied with my current career. It lets me make enough money as well as learning a new language. Besides, I enjoy the company of my great co-workers such as Dr. Behmanesh.
I would like to keep the lines of communication open in case you were looking for a dentist to cover night shifts.
Yours faithfully,
Dr. Aidin Farughi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, thus, well, at least, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26470588235 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37651588645 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9341891243 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302969987212 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109741911313 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885975936518 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171630640966 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966004348295 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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