Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Different people will give different responses to this question from their own characters, emotional concerns, and even educational backgrounds. I would like to illustrate more clearly my point of view in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention because of our progression in the earth. For example, inventing the car is one of the most important our progressions that it becomes air pollution in the most of country, and It causes the traffic jam. In addition, global warming is another disaster that cars become it.
On the other hand, I would like to say all progressions are not good us, but progress in medicine is the pest. Not only is progress in the medicine good but also we can help people live more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 606.0 1977.66487455 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 407.700716846 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 4.48103885553 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77999911182 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 212.727598566 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.524837075471 130% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 618.680645161 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9579571992 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5714285714 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933772433638 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421408115864 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452965156049 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597047605908 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568029530301 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 86.8835125448 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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