You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to the employment posting in Times Newspaper dated Sunday, 21st April 2017.
I am a 24 year old PhD. Student studying in Calrox University. Since our summer break is approaching, I thought of taking up a summer job instead of exploring tourist destination outside the city.
As a history student, I have excellent historical background which will help to explain customers about the artifacts. Moreover, I am very good with Finance and computers which will enable me to help you with accounts.
Being a PhD researcher, this job will be a blessing in disguise for me as I will be connected with my stream, that is ancient artifacts and can continue with my course work without extra effort. I am really looking forward with opportunity, in terms of compensation I am alright with suitable offer.
Awaiting for your kind response.
Yours faithfully
Steve Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to the employment posting in Times Newspap...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...on I am alright with suitable offer. Awaiting for your kind response. Yours faithfully...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1045751634 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86180484156 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4095579839 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117969252389 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424039303012 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361101953233 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683251582389 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311330763679 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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