Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, as we are living in the modern era and the dominant technological innovations are rapidly developing, people in the twentieth century incline are got affected strongly technology in order to apply in their daily life. Besides the negative aspects, I believe that information technology has offered lots of helpfulnesses. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will outline in this following essay.
To begin with, years ago, individuals took months to send and receive a letter with news from their relatives and friends. It was such a time-consuming and sluggish way to fully communicate with one another. Yet, today, we can spread messages, contact and get access to our acquaintances, as well as make new friends. With the advent of technology, we are connecting closer and feeling comfortable regardless of the distance.
Secondly, each person can become a professional expert at almost every profession by self-study with the support from computers or electrical items. it has given opportunities to everybody to get educated by themselves. There are more than one trillion terabyte of documents on internet. Additionally, a massive part of those are books, journals, articles and other educational materials, such as online courses, videos, etc
Finally, nowadays, as individuals incline to get swamped with variety of work, they do not have time to go shopping or purchasing things at stores. As a result, they have their goods shipped effortlessly and directly to their houses with the convenient delivery service by ordering items on the internet with several manipulations.
To sum up, I am of opinion that information technology has brought a lot of positive consequences with these upmentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33576642336 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11545467972 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664233576642 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5686841534 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108440812117 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356572629837 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523196643633 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626662318768 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580744655911 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.6 Out of 6.0
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